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Monday, March 24, 2008

you brought my whole world crashing down...
there it is, on the pavement, in a million tiny peices...
look, there's the piece where you told me you loved me...
oh, there's the piece where you first asked me to be your girlfriend...
and there's the piece where i had to watch you walk away...

it's not your fault my life is in pieces...
well it is your fault but then again it isn't...
it is your fault because the reason my life is falling apart is because you're not in it...
but it isn't your fault because it was my fault you had to leave...
so i guess now i realize, i'm the one who brought all of it down on top of me...

because of my stupid mistake...
you were shoved out of my life...
but i can't live with out you...
and i don't know how much longer i will last...
i miss you, and my life hasn't been the same since you left...

1 comment:

MacAmoroso said...

baby, i love you so much! hearing ur voice yesterday and hearing you tell me u love me seriously made me get a weird feeling in my chest, like my heart wanted 2 jump out of me and dance around. i was kinda scared that all this separation made u feel less in love w/ me, but hearing u say those words made me feel like a million pounds were taken off my back. i love you so much. i cant say that enuf. one thing that u said in one o ur comments, about kissing...thats pretty much how i feel 2. i normally wld never say this, but i miss the emotions behind the kisses. its like my way of saying "i love you" and getting more of the meaning out than the words could ever say. if it wasnt 4 u i would never have said any of that, but i dont care any more. i just want you to know that i love you. i love more than anyone could ever understand.

-i love you-
Justin


justin...
you are my superman...
and i always want to be your lois lane...

him: "you have to be the most beautiful girl i have ever seen."
her: "then you must be blind"
him: "nope, just in love"


I'm about to fall asleep on the phone then he whisphers
Him: "you are so cute."
Me: "huh?"
Him: "i can imagine you half asleep right now... you look so darn cute..."
Its funny cuz ive never fallen asleep around him... how does he know these things

Everyday I Fall More In Love With You More
Not Because Of What You Do For Me Or How You Act
But Because I Have Finally Realized
Your Everything Ive Been Looking For

justin... i'd kill myself before i'd ever experience one moment of my life knowing it'd be a moment of my life without you.

I love you.
Not just for who you are,
But for who I am when I'm with you.


It Was A Love Like No Other.The Kind Of Love Where He Would Whisper In Her Ear How Much He Loved Her, Just For Her To Hear;But He Would Rather Scream It From the Rooftop For Everyone To Know He Was Crazy About This Girl.

Him "What should I do?"
Her "Follow your heart"
Him 'What do you think my heart is saying"
Her "I dont know, Im not your heart"
Him "You're most of it"

Boy : * looks at girl and smiles *
Girl : * giggles * what !?
Boy : ...how did i get so lucky ?


In the end I'm not perfect,I'll annoy you & tick you off,Say stupid things & then take them back.But put all of that aside..You will never find a girl who loves you more than me.

You know its love when you can't stand going one day without seeing him and when you can't you do everything you can to see him.


I've lived my pastI'm living my present But you have my future


"God made spaces between my fingers for you to fill"

**somewhere between//
all our laughs//
our long talks//
and all our jokes//
I feel in Love.**


He told her..."I'm not scared of anything... except losing you..."

When I first saw you, I was afraid to talk to you.
When I first talked to you, I was afraid to like you.
When I first liked you, I was afraid to love you.
Now that I love you, I'm afraid to lose you.

I used to have a list of everything I wanted in a guy…But once I met you I threw that list away;Because you were everything on it and more


Maybe its the way you say my name,
or the way I get everytime we talk,
or the way you make me laugh when nothing is funny…whatever it is,
I'm never letting go of it


I will never forget those nights where id close my eyes and dream of you and woke up happy knowing every second you were gone was one second closer to me and you seeing each other once more.