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Thursday, March 13, 2008

You promised never to let me fall…
Yet here I am on the ground, bloody and bruised…
And all you can do is stare…
With that blank expression of yours…
That stare I know all too well…
The one you gave me when u pushed me away…

Your eyes say it all…
They say you don't care and you never will…
They say it doesn’t pain you to see me lying here…
They say you didn't feel a thing when you turned around and walked away….
When all you had to do was reach down and help me up…
But that would mean you had to care….

You would have had to let your guard down…
You would have had to be vulnerable with someone…
And actually show someone some compassion…
Actually show someone that you had a heart…
You don't have one your self so now u want to kill mine…
You want to rip my still beating heart out all together…

Don't waste your precious breath…
There's nothing more you can say…
You apologized, but i know you didn't mean it…
Because that would mean you actually had some dignity…
Just do me a favor and walk away…
And take your pride and arrogance with you…

One day I will forget all about you…
But you will always remember me…
This is the last time you will hear my voice or see my face…
Now watch me walk out of your life forever…
And just remember…
I'm the one who lives happily ever after…

this is dedicated to kirill gillis... the one who inspired it and the one who showed me that i deserve better...and i found it...i love my superman

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love you too baby

Ki Gillis said...

You have got to be the most emotional fucking cow on this eroding planet. Well written though. You’re not a complete retard.


justin...
you are my superman...
and i always want to be your lois lane...

him: "you have to be the most beautiful girl i have ever seen."
her: "then you must be blind"
him: "nope, just in love"


I'm about to fall asleep on the phone then he whisphers
Him: "you are so cute."
Me: "huh?"
Him: "i can imagine you half asleep right now... you look so darn cute..."
Its funny cuz ive never fallen asleep around him... how does he know these things

Everyday I Fall More In Love With You More
Not Because Of What You Do For Me Or How You Act
But Because I Have Finally Realized
Your Everything Ive Been Looking For

justin... i'd kill myself before i'd ever experience one moment of my life knowing it'd be a moment of my life without you.

I love you.
Not just for who you are,
But for who I am when I'm with you.


It Was A Love Like No Other.The Kind Of Love Where He Would Whisper In Her Ear How Much He Loved Her, Just For Her To Hear;But He Would Rather Scream It From the Rooftop For Everyone To Know He Was Crazy About This Girl.

Him "What should I do?"
Her "Follow your heart"
Him 'What do you think my heart is saying"
Her "I dont know, Im not your heart"
Him "You're most of it"

Boy : * looks at girl and smiles *
Girl : * giggles * what !?
Boy : ...how did i get so lucky ?


In the end I'm not perfect,I'll annoy you & tick you off,Say stupid things & then take them back.But put all of that aside..You will never find a girl who loves you more than me.

You know its love when you can't stand going one day without seeing him and when you can't you do everything you can to see him.


I've lived my pastI'm living my present But you have my future


"God made spaces between my fingers for you to fill"

**somewhere between//
all our laughs//
our long talks//
and all our jokes//
I feel in Love.**


He told her..."I'm not scared of anything... except losing you..."

When I first saw you, I was afraid to talk to you.
When I first talked to you, I was afraid to like you.
When I first liked you, I was afraid to love you.
Now that I love you, I'm afraid to lose you.

I used to have a list of everything I wanted in a guy…But once I met you I threw that list away;Because you were everything on it and more


Maybe its the way you say my name,
or the way I get everytime we talk,
or the way you make me laugh when nothing is funny…whatever it is,
I'm never letting go of it


I will never forget those nights where id close my eyes and dream of you and woke up happy knowing every second you were gone was one second closer to me and you seeing each other once more.